There are several features which bring together me and Homer. His wife’s name is Marge, their dog is probably a greyhound, and above all we have a similar attitude towards life.
He is lazy, and on my business card I mentioned idler as specialization.
He does not contribute much to house cleaning; my task at home is wash dishing….within a 48 hours deadline.
He doesn.t bother with his personal care. I do not own a comb from the age of 14.
Of course, I have not is thoughtlessness (despreocupación in castellano, very interesting word) and his heavy levity, but I am working on it.
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My corrections are:
There are several features that bring together Homer and I.
“.. I mention..” You need to use the present tense or present perfect as your business card still has this on it now.
“washing the dishes..or doing the washing up”
“I haven´t owned a comb since the age of 14” you need to use the present perfect as this action started in the past and has continued into the present.
“However, I am not thoughtless like Homer and I don´t have his heavy build..” I think you mean build. I don´t understand what you mean by levity.
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There are several features that bring together Homer and me. His wife?s name is Marge, their dog is probably a greyhound, and above all we have a similar attitude towards life.
He is lazy, and on my business card on one occasion I mentioned idler as specialization.
He does not contribute much to house cleaning; my task at home is washing the dishes?. within a 48 hours deadline.
He doesn?t bother with his personal care. I haven?t owned a comb since the age of 14.
Of course, I am not thoughtless like Homer (despreocupado in castellano, very interesting word) and his heavy levity, but I am working on it.
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